August 25, 2005

Precipice

you are this force that envelops my mind
brings me to the brink,
the final edge.
you push me past the absolute limit
and I come back for more.
you do something to me I can't understand
so clean, so pure
you make it so easy.
who are you?

11 Comments:

At 8:10 AM, Blogger Jenn said...

OoOoh....I like this...

 
At 8:28 AM, Blogger Lara said...

I love when I've got someone in my life that gives me these same feelings.

 
At 8:50 AM, Blogger Maggi-nifica said...

This is a poem and a riddle.
A riddle with many answers for each who read it:
A woman
A man
A goal
A wish
A desire
A burning for more

 
At 4:13 PM, Blogger drunkbh said...

I'm tempted to make a lewd remark about who am I but I'll play nice for a change.

That was very nice.

 
At 8:33 PM, Blogger sdk said...

Hmmm. Nice...

sdk

 
At 8:57 PM, Blogger Lindsey said...

I loved it! You are so talented. My poetry sucks...so now i'll just continue to read yours instead.

 
At 11:52 PM, Blogger seething said...

Curious reflecting. Is it the grasp of the person or our own desire to be grasped? Either way, enticing position to find yourself in. Enjoy.

 
At 12:13 AM, Blogger *Natalia* said...

I like it. The what-if... and what it conjures up.

It is such a gift to be able to express it so eloquently.

 
At 7:02 AM, Blogger Neonalune said...

You write the most beautiful poems.

 
At 8:52 AM, Blogger butterfly said...

I agree with *natalia*.
It´s amazing your ability to translate such strong feelings in words. Certainly a gift. Use it more often...

 
At 2:34 PM, Blogger Buffalo said...

Yeah. Right on!

 

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