Precipice
you are this force that envelops my mind
brings me to the brink,
the final edge.
you push me past the absolute limit
and I come back for more.
you do something to me I can't understand
so clean, so pure
you make it so easy.
who are you?
leaked by Mad Munkey @ 12:07 AM
9 Paranoid Schizophrenic's said
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OoOoh....I like this...
I love when I've got someone in my life that gives me these same feelings.
This is a poem and a riddle.
A riddle with many answers for each who read it:
A woman
A man
A goal
A wish
A desire
A burning for more
I'm tempted to make a lewd remark about who am I but I'll play nice for a change.
That was very nice.
Hmmm. Nice...
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I loved it! You are so talented. My poetry sucks...so now i'll just continue to read yours instead.
You write the most beautiful poems.
I agree with *natalia*.
It´s amazing your ability to translate such strong feelings in words. Certainly a gift. Use it more often...
Yeah. Right on!
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